normallyinsane21

Today was the annular solar eclipse. And I was suddenly reminded of this great piece of work I recently re-read. 
          	
          	And yet again, it did not fail to make me shed tears. Despite being fiction, I couldn't help but wonder if that's what actually happened and today is yet another union between the two fated lovers.
          	
          	Malphus♡Gabriel
          	https://www.wattpad.com/story/8619544

_purplexed_

do read my story Miracles and Magic. its not that good, but do give it a try and i really want to know your opinion.

_purplexed_

@normallyinsane21 after updating all chapters i was thinking of editing the whole book from the start. Now im just trying to update all chapters. I know right ? there are many grammatical mistakes, i have to edit alot. The thing is im not a good writer, i like to make up stories and tell them. From observing some ppl and trying to make their own story is what i'm good at. But putting them to words, i really suck. Thats why my name is verteller, im just a story teller
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normallyinsane21

@_verteller_ the plot is quite thick to be honest, in a good way ofc
            Number of grammatical errors
            The fact that this is a Muslim story dictated in a not so Muslim way is the best feature❤
            However the description could have been better to attract more readers
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_purplexed_

@normallyinsane21 do read the introduction part first and if u like it, do read. Because my book contains lots of terrible things
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ScarlettBlackDaisy

Hey! Thank you so much for reading "Knowing Xavier" ^_^ really hope you like it and don't hesitate to share your views ❤️

ScarlettBlackDaisy

@normallyinsane21
            
            Thank you so much, dear! I'm really glad you liked the story and my writing ^_^ ❤️❤️
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normallyinsane21

@ScarlettBlackDaisy hey, it was my pleasure reading a well written book
            The plot is not untouched but u brought it about in a different light
            Haley and her dad are goals❤
            Beautifully written
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thequeenkikii

Hello! I hope you are doing great. I've started writing a book; The Entangled Tales. Please give it a look. I hope you like it.❤

normallyinsane21

@thequeenkikii hey there
            I went through "The Entangled Tales"
            And I must commend the play of words you've achieved
            Short, simple, sweet with basic traits of a story depicting an Islamic household
            Chapter length is not too over or under whelming as well
            Good work!
            Keep up
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normallyinsane21

@thequeenkikii Yes, I'm doing great. Thank you. Sure, I would love to go through your book.
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imallien

I'm sorry dear if I'm disturbing you but in your free time plz give my book hearted heartless a chance. 
          Hope you enjoy reading it. 
          I'll be glad to hear comments from you. 
          Keep smiling dear. 

imallien

@normallyinsane21 sure I will try. Thank you for suggestion❤
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normallyinsane21

@imallien actually a small suggestion
            Keep editing side by side
            Else later it will become a burden
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imallien

@normallyinsane21 thank you so much for giving it a chance. 
            I'm very happy you are liking it. 
            I'll try to rectify typos or edit as soon as I complete the story  .
            Have a great day. ❤❤❤❤
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