Hi! You can delete this if u want.
Could you check out my story HOW TO: Survive Inside this Forsaken World with Me!!
It's an original story, and I am open to any criticism to better myself as an author because I'm not that good. If you do read, could you tell me what you think of my characters? I'm trying to make sure I make them as well rounded as possible, and they don't fall flat the more I write.
You don't have to though.