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Question: are you guys really liking the story? I feel like it seems like it's all over the place and fictional even though the story is fictional. I don't you know if guys understand what I'm saying, but if you do let me know what you guys think. I feel like the story just seems like shit now. All comments/thoughts are welcome. Just please be considerate and kind. I want to make this story as enjoyable as possible for you all.