notchrolloatall

You alive?

Did u restart your story? 

@chomulol69 

@chomulol69 it's decent but i think you should add more depth like more description on the chracters reactions and how they feel inside. You should've kept some parts of the plots similar to how it is in naruto but its still good

@chomulol69 i finished it

@chomulol69 nahh imma read it

@chomulol69  makes sense

@chomulol69 you good? 

@chomulol69 oh yh i do why? 

@chomulol69