Lacuna_Afton
Do you write lemons??
notimetiwrite
Dustinsage
Yo after so long you finally updated
notimetiwrite
yo. i still exist
notimetiwrite
new story on the way
HattoriHeiji121
@notimetiwrite Your story of Issei is getting everyone mad! He's hurt, over and over again! They even resort of using his parents just to establish peace! They do it by force, practically against his free will! He was betrayed over and over again! Seriously, I'm disappointed... a lot!! What do you trying to achieve by writing story this ridiculous in the first place?!!
Yogap56747
Please make another DxD story
notimetiwrite
Do you hate my story? Be honest and tell me what you don't like.
WilliamHoskins
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And than theirs the fact that like one week after he was tortured by rias/Valerie he forgives them and yes he can heal doesn't really matter torture is torture like come on u had him kill a bunch of fallen angels because four of them killed his parents yet when it comes to him himself it's just uh yes I was marked as a stray every strong fallen angel devil and angel tried to kill me hooray and than their the fact that he forgave them just because he was asked
WilliamHoskins
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Author I liked ur story in the beginning but once u reach the part with rias it just feels like u gave them to much power sure their his mates and all that but letting xenovia stay when they fucking knew he didn't like her is fucked up
WilliamHoskins
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It's just the romance and shit it seems like he's the one in the backseat while their the ones driving I'm not trying to be rude but I like ur story but u just make it seem like he's just not in control like
notimetiwrite
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@WilliamHoskins ok i see what you're saying. i may have made him a little t-- OH FUCK IT! I made him way too powerful! I'll admit it! I'm just writing for fun. I thought people liked a powerful main character who doesn't like to get beaten and has most of the world either with him of against him most of the time. You know, villain protagonist.
Inferno3054
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Honestly, your story is enjoyable but all sorts of fucked up.
Keep it up though, I rarely see any active DxD fics at all.
Gamer1234Amazing
Yo. Your story is amazing. Just wondering when you would upload the next chapter. Anyway, Keep the Good Work!!
notimetiwrite
@Gamer1234Amazing thanks for the kind words bro. new chapter should be up in a day or two. Maybe three lol