If you want help with stories that are soon to be publish, I have a few tricks on my sleeves:
1.) Make sure the story is connected to the title.
2.) If your adding your Original Characters (OCs) in your story, make sure they have connected with the story.
3.) Before you start, list the roles of every characters that will be include in the story. (Ex. Frisk - Protagonist) Make more research for more information.
I hope this actually help you and I hope you gain more followers. :) Have a nice day/night.