dayz3

Haii ! Haelyn loaves u :3

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hello guysss what do i do !! lowkey wanna restart my work huhu. i reread it and i'm cringing sb, it makes me wanna change the plot and everything.

— hi!! Thank you for following, pa basa at vote narin po ng story ko. Muahh!! ^~^
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          - nythrh1xx 

haluuuu i just read racing hearts! it was a nice read, honestly. likeable si astraea and she's v interesting, tapos ang ganda rin ng premise ng story. hindi ko nga lang ma-differentiate pa yung ibang characters huhu maybe you could work on the characterization, like highligjting their distinct features para mas ma-differentiate sila ^^ but overall it's nice!
          
          ps. sorry ang tagal kong magbasa huhuhuhu, i had to put down my phone multiple times cuz i'm not feeling well today !! D':

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if i could share just a little feedback, i do find myself getting a bit confused with some of the character names at times, maybe because there are quite a few introduced. but overall, it doesn't take away from how good the story is. the way you write, especially your descriptions, really helps in painting a vivid picture, which makes up for those small moments of confusion ><

ang ganda ng story na 'to. recommended talaga. i can genuinely say i am enjoying it, especially since i am someone who loves anything related to medical themes, so it's definitely something that catches my interest. tapos the way you describe the scenes and the flow of the story is so engaging, it really pulls the reader in. babasahin ko 'to after ko makipag bebetime hahaha ><

hi let's support each other, vtv??