+take a look at @YulSmile,@free-spirited-cat, and @apocalyptic_a's books. They're my friends from school, and we're all trying our best to keep our books interesting.
(Also check out @SNGamingYT when his Crippling Depression™ book comes out.) ;))
So glad it helped! Keep writing and pushing forward. Get those ideas out on the page. It doesn't matter if its perfect. Once its written you have something to work with:-)
@stpolishook I appreciated the feedback, it helped me move my story forward since I was stuck trying to point out mistakes even after I published the chapter, because I felt something was off. x'D