Hey, I really like your story spirit. But when I was looking at the chapters, I got confused. Chapter 9 is missing. It goes from 8 to 10 and i was wondering why. Its a really good story so far though, its an interesting read and I like how you didnt make the main character come from a banner house or from, House Lannister, House Stark, House Baratheon, or House Targaeryn. Though, if that is where you are going with this story then that is fine and at least you made it seem like she wasnt from those houses.