notsogreatbook

Hello, will check out, vote and share your book if you can do the same ! 
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/365611008?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=xxlexieslawxx
          

Hey guyyss, i just published a few chapters to my first book ever. Would love some ideas for the storyline or constructive criticism. Have a lovley dayyy