@AtomicToaster I did enjoy it and I'll make sure to read it all. I like your dialogue and the way you get characters across even though there's not much context in the first chapter.
You have a nice day too.
@indyjohn I'm definitely enjoying it. Sorry for not giving as much feedback as I should be giving. I like the character development and the way you don't write the story as a clearcut issue. I'll certainly be reading the whole thing. Thanks for writing it
@oliviarose85 You're welcome. I appreciate the effort you're making with the book of tips. I've only got one work at the moment so I have a feeling I'll need all the help I can get.