Dude, I recommend that you need to edit your story, not to be rude or anything. I'm just giving you advice, also read my new story, it's about Zendaya and her life, falling in love with Kylie Mathews, hope you like it
Ryuuko-Satuki~
Hiii, i was wondering if you have a spare time and maybe you could just read my book called 'its a secret' and maybe vote for it too ? Because that would be so amazing and i appreciate it so much , thank you !x