@realjeffseymour I am very excited to continue reading! I just read the first few pages, and they were very good! You are one of the only other authors I have met who also uses "Once Upon a Time", and yours works very well in the beginning of the story! I cannot wait to keep reading, and thanks for being so engaging with readers. It's really nice to hear from authors themselves! And if you want feedback, I would be glad to give it :) Thanks!