J533ee

Hi, my name is james i am new in wattpad, and I'm writing a short story could take a look? grateful http://w.tt/1KCH3IX  ●°♧□•♣♣□•□•♣□•♣•♣♣□•♧□•♧□•

nowyou_seeme

It was good, but it could be polished up a little more. But for not writing in English, it was better than I expected. If you would like some help. I would be more than happy to help you edit it.
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