Jade Su

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Back from the 3 day weekend! 

I'm off to bed, might try and read and review a bit before but no promises. Will be back again tomorrow. :)

Hiya, 
          Thanks for fanning (:

Description of my next story. :P really excited about this one :) Oh, and it's called "Last train home". :D
          
          Erin Tyler has dedicated most of her life to keeping people safe. Protecting the citizens of New York from a distance. As an NYPD homicide detective, it is her job. That is until a new serial killer starts plaguing the streets of New York. Killing people that use all modes of transport in the city - and effectively grinding the city to a halt. What will Erin do when she finds herself stuck on the subway - where all the people on the train are murdered one-by-one? Will she be able to find the killer? Or will the killer find her? 

Just got an iPod touch, which on second thoughts, wasn't the best thing to do on the weekend before most of my exams lol. Anyway, will try and update this weekend in-between revision of course ;) thanks for being patient tho people, honestly :)

Hey I'm new to wattpad and I need some feedback. Could you critique my story? I only have one sooo... :) 

@numbing_gum :D And your new chapter is just as awesome! Keep going!

@Lyaero Once again, thank you so much :) I've gone through and corrected what you told me too as well. I'll start work on the new chapter tomorrow ;D

Fanned! I hope you've got a good follow-up to your first chapter! I was pretty blown away :)