gaytrashbag

Hiii, love! I was wondering if you could please check out my book, The Female Santa, and leave behind your thoughts and criticism. There are hardly two chapters for now and it's a mix of the genres Romance and Humour. I will highly appreciate it if you will read it, no pressure tho. :) 
          Thank you. Have a lovely day!

nurnadanadanada_

@gaytrashbag Sorry for replying late. Anyway when I read your book I felt like the chapters were a bit to short. However the way the story flows is quite good. Maybe you should be more descriptive about the way the lead feels. Like was she guilty or worried that her boss would fire her? In the book she said she liked the job because of her eye - candy boss. And maybe you could add more parts about why she hates Christmas so much. Did an accident occur during Christmas killing people or what? I think that would make the story more interesting. I love your story idea. It is extremely unique unlike anything I have seen in wattpad. It's very captivating. I hope my feedback was helpful
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