@nuwa_kai
I really should stop posting before my chapters are ready lmao I was outlining chapter 6 and was like you know what? I forgot to give physical descriptions of the side characters ksjisdjfisjdf so now I gotta go in and edit chapter 2. and maybe delete the current ch 2 from wattpad. And chapter 3 hasn't even been written out yet, literally exists in bullet points form.
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Mmm btw i no longer do r4r so dont feel obligated to read my book. If i read yours it’s bc i like it.
i managed to word vomit out 1 chapter of the rewrite, dont come at me lol, idk when the next chapter is gonna be like maybe 2, 3 weeks.
oh lmao my book is still up on inkitt and someone said pls finish the book. i feel so guilty T.T
right so im stopping with this book, ugh. main issue im having so much trouble progressing their relationship, i should have included the backstory earlier in the chapters, massimilano is too much of an a-hole, plus apparently if i switched this to first person pov, i can make massimiliano slightly funny (think flynn from tangled)
@zafnahehehe_ ok so i uploaded ch 1 lol. i actually decided to rewrite it trad pub style. so i can just easily convert it to an ebook for self publishing
@zafnahehehe_ lol im still working on the outline, so i guess in a few weeks if i manage to write a few chapters of backlog
not me doing the bare minimum on all the chapters except for upcoming ch 14 lmao ok tbf this is all still very drafty, i will do a rewrite later on when im done with everything . feast your eyes on this mess of a creation :)
I'm cracking up because I'm editing a chapter on cocaine heist and realized that the math wasnt mathing so now im out here with a calculator, trying to make sense of my heist scene. When this chapter drops (ch 18) pls give it extra love because this was such a headache to write lol.
@LynnErinFaye hahaha i wish! if i was editing on coke i'd be much more productive than this!
Girl…I almost thought it said you were “editing a chapter on cocaine” and was like…Well damn, get you some! Bwahahaha! Then I slowed down and realized that you’re editing the chapter about the cocaine heist and was like…fuhhh that makes so much more sense. I. Am. Deceased.
I feel so dead after two days of vetting at an art fair plssss. And tomorrow I have to go to the opening too, and again on Saturday.
I've been trying to sneak in some time to edit chapters in the bathroom and let me tell you that it wasn't working at all lol. My brain is mush.
I should really stop saying gaze. My characters gaze a lot for no reason lol. But I really wanted to convey that 'look at me bbygirl, you feel that tension?' kinda vibe, you know. It's hard :D
Pls let me know if you have better ideas on how to convey this emotion other than crazily staring into each others eyes. Well actually it's the guy who's staring at her, and she's just like..umm this is uncomfortable.