AYYYYYYY I'M BACK AFTER A YEAR LONG HIATUS. IF YOU WANT SOMEONE WHO'S A HARDCORE BOOK REVIEWER CONE TO ME and I can tell you how your readers might interpret your story. Don't be butthurt please. You ask for advice, I give you my opinion. If you're wanting "oh, it's really good" Then don't come to me. If you want "When I read this story I find that I start to think your character is..." Then come to me. My expectations are JK Rowling high. No, too high. Make that a Kelly Armstrong or a Wattpad #1 new York times bestseller.