JustBaraa12
Idk why but I feel like in one chp, that rather they gonna fight against Carl or he has something in past that he might breakdown and someone comfort him
As much how he has good development character but something like he hide something, idk mabye iam wrong one
JustBaraa12
@nyantoemyint ahh I see , of course take your time, as long it keeps to be funny and action - what i mean by fight that is if we gonna see touhou characters fight agianst him , idk when chp 22 he was almost get effected by vampire power , wondering if he take other powers would out of control or something (sorry if I don't make any sense since my English) As for adjustments nothing need beaucse the stroy is peak and everything, but Hope if we some angst on Carl, beaucse i always love the stories when they comfort mc or something but at the same it feels like he hide something, remember when he said, iam magician always to make them smile or happy, I mean since he wanna do but it's feels like he wanna make them happy rather being himself or like as long they are happy
nyantoemyint
@JustBaraa12 "Don’t worry, you're not mistaken. I write this way to gradually reveal his background and explain how he acquired this ability. I'm not sure what you mean (whether they're going to fight against Carl). If you're asking if there will be a battle, yes, I plan to write a scene where vampires from the outside world enter Gensokyo during the Sixty Year Cycle Great Barrier Incident. Thanks for bringing that up! If there's anything you think is off, feel free to let me know. I’m still working on the Spring Snow Incident, so it might take a while to get there since I want to create a story that's both funny and action-packed." Let me know if you need any other adjustments!