nysaraee

ter....un....pub....

nysaraee

salam, satu dunia kena tahu jari aku tersepit pintu kereta harini. tutup salam

ascellawfs

@nysaraee  siannye meh nak gigit
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sofea_sabre32

@nysaraee KBAT bena soalan kamu cherry :-( :-( :-( :-( :-( 
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izzahiffah_

I really like this storyline!dahla kael ni pandai bab ii agama,tak naik suara dekat isteri and selalu mengutamakan isteri daripada diri sendiri!memang green forestt la!

nysaraee

THANKYOU SM! boleh cuba baca my sec story juga hehe. there's a lot of improvement in the storyline (insyallah) also, ML yang laaaaaaaagi hijau <3
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nysaraee

rasa macam nak buat penambahbaikan untuk target:lara camelia incase nak send mss to publisher bcs honestly, cerita dia agak tak logik. Nak ubah mcm Lara tu mmg criminal like bunuh ii org? Kael obv i don't want him to be a ceo but maybe a police who hides Lara? atau pun mak ayah Lara tak mati pun sebenarnya? ok sekian angan ii hari isnin (2 mss tak siap lagi) bye.