nyx3rae

chap 15 & 16 up now !!

nyx3rae

hello guysss what do i do !! lowkey wanna restart my work huhu. i reread it and i'm cringing sb, it makes me wanna change the plot and everything.

nyx3rae

@elfraneur aww i truly appreciate your support !! THANK YOU SM
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elfraneur

personally you're doing great! but if you want to revamp it, that's your decision naman as the author, whatever will make you feel better. rooting for you! <33 
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elfraneur

haluuuu i just read racing hearts! it was a nice read, honestly. likeable si astraea and she's v interesting, tapos ang ganda rin ng premise ng story. hindi ko nga lang ma-differentiate pa yung ibang characters huhu maybe you could work on the characterization, like highligjting their distinct features para mas ma-differentiate sila ^^ but overall it's nice!
          
          ps. sorry ang tagal kong magbasa huhuhuhu, i had to put down my phone multiple times cuz i'm not feeling well today !! D':

nyx3rae

thankk you smm sa pag read !! APPRECIATE IT A LOT  ima try my best and edit my work pa, but thank youu i appreciate your honest feedback !! 
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