Hi, if any followers have reads Graves or cut off after a certain point I was hoping for some criticism, comments, advice on how I could make the book more enjoyable. I understand the feeling when you just have to delete a book after a certain point because the author's style is lacking, the book has far too many errors in plot or grammar/punctuation, or the book is just dead boring. I'm hoping to change that and I'm thinking maybe I shouldn't continue writing chapters until the story is more enjoyable for you guys. Pretty please with sprinkles on whipped cream on hot chocolate give me some feedback
-Nicky