Dear Author,
So I've read all the chapters it's good but it can be better, I've noticed some loopholes. For instance, after Tanisha's welcoming ceremony post-marriage, her mother-in-law was present, but she suddenly disappeared after the first night. I'd also like to point out that initially, Ayman didn't threaten Tanisha's loved ones, so it's unclear why she didn't attempt to escape or inform her parents or friend about her situation. It seems like she forgot about her mother until Ayman mentioned her mom was calling him non-stop. Apart from him torturing and manipulating her, there's no other plot.Show a bit about his work life, the business he's doing, and a little about his background. Additionally, his relationship with his parents is underdeveloped as there's no back story about his current nature you can show a chapter showcasing his relationship with his mother (who seems to forget about him). The story feels centered around Ayman and Tanisha only with occasional appearance of his mistress. You can also add little about Tanisha's childhood ...adding more plots or character development could make it more engaging. Overall, the story has a good plot but needs further development to reach its full potential.
