Dark Gypsy

I'm sorry everyone who follows this account, I lost the email and the password. Once this happened I lost some passion for writing and I was forced on different things. But I have regained the passion for writing and even though I won't be continuing any story here I will be beginning new ones, and now I have more time to just do writing I will be more reliable. 
          
           I am sorry for anyone who wanted the end to any story here but I hope you understand. 
          
          I hope this reaches people, have a lucky day!

After so long I'm making a new chapter to Onniadolon! Hope you like it!
          
          -DarkGypsy

Hey guys, I'm starting a new book and here's the first paragraph, tell me if you think there's anything I should change or do it to.
          
          In a dark and grey city, 8 kids around a fire, three of them were in their mid-teens but the others look as if they were only toddlers. All of them were dressed in rags that they found in this ghost town.   
          “It’s been over 15 years since the first soldiers came, all of them dressed in these black uniforms that cover their whole body including their faces. Faceless killers. They dived tanks through the once peaceful streets of D.C. Washing-”
          “Nate, you need to stop telling the kids that story! You're going to scare them.”
          
          So what do you guys think?

Hey guys sorry I haven't written anything in a while. I  broke my arm and I couldn't write for a bit, but I'm back and you should be getting more chapters very soon.
          -DarkGypsy