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This is awesome, honestly it's great. Hope you write something like this again. Honestly because soccer is my life and I am bisexual so this is like so cool to read . 

I loveed the book I just finished it 

Hi! Just here to say that you story Collision is so good. I stayed up all night reading it, I couldn’t get enough. I love everything about the book from the authenticity of situations to the plot progression. The story wasn’t choppy or unrealistic. Overall, I just wanted to say how much I loved it and how satisfied I am! 

Alright you guys!!! Several of you have made comments on Collision about my mistake of using quarters instead of halves, and I heard you loud and clear! I think I’ve corrected it, but if you see any more mistakes let me know! 
          
          -Olivia 

Collision is finished! The story is posted publicly now, and I am so excited for feedback!! I hope you all enjoy Alecia's story, and I promise next time I post a story I will update more regularly! Hmu with any comments, questions, or concerns!
          
          ~Olivia

I have a lot of ideas for the second draft of Collision, which I'm going to start right after I finish this first draft. It involves taking out some characters, having Alecia think she's straight until she meets Penelope, among other things. Flashbacks have been nixed.

Absolutely loved your story and writing style it's not everyday I read something with such potential great job