Melisa

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          Hi Melisa,
          I was curious because it's good to see someone with a good enough vocabulary to know the difference between complement and compliment.
          
          I checked out the blurb on your incomplete book and have some comments:
          
          1. I suggest changing the tag from Ongoing to Discontinued.
          
          2. You got four chapters further than I ever did.
          
          3. The idea for your book seems like a good one - Maybe you could find a good author to pass it on to, along with any notes, in exchange for acknowledgement that it was your idea.
          
          4. Typo: blurb says ".… she is the brother of..."

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I forget the book I found you on but I just wanted to say your constructive criticism is good.  Idk why authors are getting butt hurt and blocking you when they can just take your advice and improve their books (:

And hey? Will you please, please continue your book? I really loved it.

 #3 & #5. You  are very frank girl. Don't take my comment on Dismissing Dakota to heart. I was just pissed off that someone would comment so heartlessly on a book. You must know how much hardwork it takes to write a book since you are a writer yourself yet you decided to write so much hurtful things. Please be little less heartless the next to comment. By the way you are a cool bitch  ;)

Black lives matter. If you are the person who continues to focus only on the riots and the “violent” aspect and proceed to undermine the movement because of it, YOU are the problem. You choose to ignore the numerous peaceful protests. You choose to ignore that it is the police who start the violence with rubber bullets and tear gas. You choose to ignore how the police are trapping the protestors, preventing them from leaving, so that they can arrest them after curfew. You choose to ignore how a number of black people, black children, are dying and going missing after every protest. You choose to ignore how most of the looters and people breaking the property of small businesses are ppl doing it for fun, white supremacists trying to make the good protestors look bad, and thieves. You choose to ignore how it is the protestors cleaning up after the looters and also trying to prevent them from break stuff. You choose to ignore how  the property of big businesses and road stuff that get damaged, are replaceable, while black lives are not. You choose to ignore how riots and peaceful protest have brought social/political change for centuries: Malcolm X,  MLK, the entire French Revolution, the Boston Tea Party/American Revolution, the Hong Kong protests, and countless more. Yet when black people do it, it’s disgusting and shameful. All they ask for is the chance to live in America unafraid, and if the police’s response is rubber bullets and tear gas, that speaks volume to the corrupt government and police system, the racism that “America the Great” has never let go of.   ✊✊✊✊✊  ❤️

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Some authors can't take criticism these days, and it makes me wonder why they chose to write a book in the first place. Why not use the criticism to make your book better, instead of blocking me.  -_-

Your bio is so true... I needed to be warned sooner XD