Magnus_shadowhunters

Beautiful 

I hope you dont mind me asking but how old are you? I like the picture in your head about how you want your books to be. But how you want your books to be and how the really are is just completely different. And to be honest I do see many grammar problems that need to be fixed. You need a lot of practice with your writing. I hope im not being to harsh or anything but your stories need work and I want you to know that. I wish to see another and better book from you sometime tho. Dont let this comment bting you down. I van see that you like mermaids and there is possibly something with your sexuality but please try practicing and trying a little harder.

Filip xD