oceansgivepeace
you know the fix bug is BAD when you’re googling common soups from the 30s and the speech and language development of a three year old
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when the writing bug hits it’s crazy…wdym i just wrote 3.5k words in two hours and it’s only chapter 1?
oceansgivepeace
if you wanna beta read/critique my new fic that i’m currently working on PLEASE hmu
it’s a bucky/f!OC (with child) with past steve/OC (engaged) lots of drama and exploration of unconventional family dynamics. i don’t know ANYTHING about pregnancy or babies or family or anything so i need someone to tell me if it’s realistic or not
each chapter is going to be about 3k words, hopefully 10-15 chapters total. so please only if you can handle reading long fic reach out.
i want critiques on:
realism
grammar/tense
balance of showing and telling
pacing
in return you get early access to my fic, a shoutout/tag. if you want me to critique/beta read your fic i will happily do so as well
oceansgivepeace
discord and email (for doc sharing and commenting) is how communication will occur, so that’s also a requirement lol
oceansgivepeace
oh we are so back. the trailer was so good. we’re so back.
oceansgivepeace
@WintersChild_3000 literally i feel the marvel in my bones waking back up like steve from the ice. im like bucky and that trailer was hydra hitting me with a “longing” and ending with a “freight car”
oceansgivepeace
yall should totally check out my ao3 bucky and peter oneshot. username is the same as here. it’s called ‘More Than Metal’. like 5k words. super cute about their friendship (NOT ROMANCE)
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btw guys i’m literally peter parker (chemistry major)
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@WintersChild_3000 yeah. i don’t have disney plus, it’s so expensive and i cancelled it after loki season 2. i’ll probably just buy the dvd lmaooo
WintersChild_3000
Wdym spend money? Do you have to pay to watch it? or do u mean for disney subscription
oceansgivepeace
okay guys hi so i haven’t logged onto wattpad in a hot minute and the app has changed so much. where are my notifications???? send help
(also it’s so sad someone took down this tom holland RPF i loved where he used to surf and i think he died at the end??? so sad. anyways if you wrote that or know who did, tell them to hit me up frrrrrr i want it)
Jai_bird_999
Hiii
oceansgivepeace
@Jai_bird_999 yea!! i lowkey was just going through it for a hot minute and then started college but im back!!
Tsunamieater
Hii fellow gay marvel fan!!!
oceansgivepeace
just finished my last ever high school theatre production :(
its-anaa
@oceansgivepeace omg I love into the woods! my hs performed grease which lwk traumatised me the first time