oceanshellz

Good morning guyss!
          	
          	How’s your day going or for those with different time zones, how did your day go today?
          	
          	Make sure to prioritize your mental health and do something for YOU today
          	
          	—> Just posted chapter 4, give it a quick view??
          	• Waiting for your feedback

your_ethereal_lover

 Just finished chapter 4 and it has left me feeling fuzzy all over.
          
           I had to tell you something there are some questions I need the answers of and my siblings are like idiots so I need like another point of view on them . So by the end of chapter 2, I asked you 2 questions if you could answer them when you finish the chapter that would be really nice. Cuz the world building is quiet intense and I need advice on what works and what not. That's it.  So i have little questions coming up in future chapters too. I'd be really happy if you could answer them as you read further.
          
          One thing i forgot to ask in the first chapter when she freezes and runs. Like when you read that scene is a reader  Do you feel the basics of how that happens or i need to give more clarity on that

your_ethereal_lover

 Sending this message from literary stealing hotspot from my mother's phone my wife is out of recharge.  My father has promised me he'll do at tonight but he is like an expert in postponing dates. So i'll be getting back to your work soon. Trust me. It's just i have so much drama in life.  And I don't know why wattpad rarely opens on my phone when I use mobile network or Mobile data So I'm already struggling

oceanshellz

@your_ethereal_lover Stan your mom’s hotspot I totally get the internet recharge thing. It’s a constant hair pulling event, around 3 times a month LOL
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oceanshellz

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@your_ethereal_lover Oh shit. May God be with you girly Can’t imagine how suffocating this can feel
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your_ethereal_lover

Please ignore the shitty way this message is written because I am pissed at this point I wrote it 4 times and it wasn't getting posted at all like it didn't show in your profile. I live in a rural area like a village and without wifi you can't work the network is that bad
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oceanshellz

Good morning guyss!
          
          How’s your day going or for those with different time zones, how did your day go today?
          
          Make sure to prioritize your mental health and do something for YOU today
          
          —> Just posted chapter 4, give it a quick view??
          • Waiting for your feedback

CourtPate

Heeeey! ♥︎ I’m Courtney. I write swoon worthy romance stories, and I’d love if you could check out my books. It would mean a lot to me. If not that’s okay. Nice to meet you! Sorry for bothering you. 
          
          If you’re interest here’s my book “Lessons in Kissing”, This book is completed! ✓
          
          If you’re interested here’s one of my books: 
          It started with a nosebleed. One accidental headbutt, one very public disaster, and suddenly Rory Callyns is that girl, the one who almost broke her crush's face.
          She's quiet, awkward, and definitely not the kind of girl who gets kissed at parties. And then there's Carden Rayne, popular, gorgeous, and the kind of boy people can't help but fall for.
          So when Rory asks him for help for kissing lessons and he says yes, it's supposed to be harmless. Practice, boost confidence, nothing really real, somewhere between the laughter, the late night talks, and the almosts that start to feel like more, practice stops feeling like pretending.
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/394543971-lessons-in-kissing

oceanshellz

I’d love to read it!! The summary and book cover look insane
            
            So excited to give it a try!!
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