oh_gee13

Okay, so as I was writing my story, I began to feel like it was losing its ground... lacking, if you will. I felt like I couldn't continue the book until I strongly edited the chapters I'd already written. There were just parts missing, out of place, or lacking in detail. Anyways, I have edited the first 5? 6? chapters so far. Built relationships a little stronger, added more detail, made my sentences flow better. I think it has improved greatly. Of course, if you don't feel like rereading them, do not fear. You won't be lost. I just wanted to make the story more enjoyable! Have a great day lovelies!

oh_gee13

Okay, so as I was writing my story, I began to feel like it was losing its ground... lacking, if you will. I felt like I couldn't continue the book until I strongly edited the chapters I'd already written. There were just parts missing, out of place, or lacking in detail. Anyways, I have edited the first 5? 6? chapters so far. Built relationships a little stronger, added more detail, made my sentences flow better. I think it has improved greatly. Of course, if you don't feel like rereading them, do not fear. You won't be lost. I just wanted to make the story more enjoyable! Have a great day lovelies!