Hi again, old me. I see you've ended your book with a cliff hanger. What the heck is wrong with you mental note: do not end books with a cliff hanger. Unless you're gonna do a sequel. Then end it with tons of cliff hangers. But I like how you name your characters. I mean, seriously? Theo and James? Lmao You were literally in to Theo James that time. And their surnames? Prior? Really? Hahaha. Divergent much? And THE CLERK'S NAME IS BEATRICE? Dude. Plus I imagined Brooklyn to be Brooklyn Beckham, I hope that was what you're going for. Also Nash, I hope his name was based on Nash Grier. I like how people get stressed whenever he's stressed hahahah Nash is literally like a pain in the butt. Anyway, I have to say it was a nice book. Not nice enough tho. It was just good for a beginner. Also, I am soooo hooked up on LOK (legend of korra) and the part where Theo is an insulator and James is a conduit controlling the rains made me imagine that James can water bend (weird but I am really in to LOK sorry) hahaha. So that's it. I'm gonna post more lmao. おやすみ〜
