alayisslayqueenjk

I just wanted to let you know how amazing your book is. I truly enjoyed reading it — the story flows beautifully and it was very hard to put down. Your writing style makes the characters and the world feel incredibly engaging.
          Honestly, at times it felt like the story was begging for a few more daring, spicy moments. Adding some bolder, more intimate scenes could really turn that tension into something unforgettable and give readers an even stronger emotional (and emotional-adjacent ) experience.
          I’m eagerly waiting for the next chapters and can’t wait to see where the story goes next.

Marshalll18

@alayisslayqueenjk 
            Agreed — a few spicier moments would go crazy 
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krustykrabs

Where is unspoken lines why did u remove it gng 

ok_ok111

I really appreciate your interest in the story don’t worry, I’m not deleting it, just editing it for now. I’ll be reposting it soon :)
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