Hi, I don't mind constructive criticism but please understand I'm only doing this for fun. I will be paying attention to my comments. Also, I will be taking suggestions (Please note I might not be able to get to everyone's suggestions so don't get mad if I missed you)
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The Boss
After Lilia was kicked out by her dad two mysterious men take her from the side of the road.
!TW! Contains vi...