olivia hopkins

publishing old writing for no reason

Hey! I just made my first story ever and I wanted to know if you can read it and give me an opinion on what you think about it? If you don't mind. If you would like to read it just search my username Jessicadiaz118 thanks!

i read ur short story "Cordelia" because you asked me to. I have to say your style of writing is quite immaculate for someone of your age. It was intense and interesting throughout which is quite a task with a short story. i give it an 8.5/10 :) KEEP WRITING DON'T STOP! xD

Hey, thanks for reading Clockwork Lives. :)

Why'd you delete juvenile thoughts? I thought it was a good plot(: but flowers is good too so(: