Hello!
Unfortunately, I'm not critiquing right now and actually I'll be taking a break from wattpad until my final exams are finished (it starts on 27/5 and lasts for 2 weeks) in order to spare more time to study.
However, I can read your story or some chapters and tell you what I think. It'll be a short comment, because I can't offer big critiques right now. I can't promise anything, meaning there won't be a deadline. If this doesn't work for you let me know.
Maria xx