dreamybanana

A while ago you said you saw my comment and wanted the same sort of feedback? Well I’m back on wattpad but I can’t remember what kind of critic I left. On other sites I would take the writing to pieces and really help people improve on everything but on this site, an no offence to you or anyone on it, but people generally want attention and are not ready (and sometimes not old enough) to hear it.
          
           I was wondering did you want a few points picked out or would you like me to give an in-depth review? Either is fine. One's quicker, but the other mean's I can be honest and really help.