@lilly_lilly0112 ah thank you! But I do understand where you're coming from. It seems as though I myself have fallen into the trap of 'repetitive fanfiction writing'. However, if you've started reading the sequel, you can see that the writing is quite different. Although I am in no way trying to force you to read it, the writing style is naturally much different, as I have started them at least 2 years apart. During that time, I have learnt things to make writing better as well as what you shouldn't do, so yeah, the sequel (in my opinion) is better.
Thanks for reading the fanfic :D
Tamsin x