Hey, just a tip for writing...When a person speaks, put quotes around them ("...") and also, correct punctuation and spelled words might help! Love the story :)
OK GUESS WHAT ONE DIRECTION HAS A NEW SONG IT IS CALLED JUST CANT LET HER GO AND THEIR THIRD ALBUM IS CALLED MIDNIGHT MEMORIES AND IM LIKE OH MY GOD MY BOYS ARE GROWING UP *tear runs down face* im so happy
oh my god i maid tea with caramel sauce in it and it tastes like liquid cookies OH MY GODS ITS SO GOOD I LOVE IT and it feels like iv been locked out of heaven for to long haha that's a good song but no really i dont know how i lived with out it