one_messed_up_mind

Honest opinion, am I the only one who hated Blood of Olympus? I cried half way through with disappointment. Not tears of joy, certainly sadness.

one_messed_up_mind

@one_messed_up_mind true, but i felt like my love for Leo decreased. He is too love sick the entire book, all of his chapters are about his thoughts on Calypso. when Percy found out about Leo's trip to the island, i wanted him to be mad cause that bitch cursed Annabeth. maybe percy could see where why the gods kept her on the island and all. i mean i ship Caleo, but i really wanted Percy to be pissed.
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realreadr123

@one_messed_up_mind i agree but atleast we all realise how amazing leo is and that caleo is inseperable
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one_messed_up_mind

Honest opinion, am I the only one who hated Blood of Olympus? I cried half way through with disappointment. Not tears of joy, certainly sadness.

one_messed_up_mind

@one_messed_up_mind true, but i felt like my love for Leo decreased. He is too love sick the entire book, all of his chapters are about his thoughts on Calypso. when Percy found out about Leo's trip to the island, i wanted him to be mad cause that bitch cursed Annabeth. maybe percy could see where why the gods kept her on the island and all. i mean i ship Caleo, but i really wanted Percy to be pissed.
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realreadr123

@one_messed_up_mind i agree but atleast we all realise how amazing leo is and that caleo is inseperable
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one_messed_up_mind

@snuffle_uffagus on behalf of the entire reader community, I would like to say that we would gladly wait for the next chapter. We all understand that school absolutely sucks

snuffle_uffagus

@one_messed_up_mind wow thank you so much! <3 you always find a way to make us smile haha you're literally the best person ever. xoxo
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one_messed_up_mind

@-PercyJackson another hint of advice: readers generally like to stay hooked on a chapter for at least 700 words, and even that is short. One-shots are generally around 1,000.  The longer and more details (details are super duper important) you include in a story, the more you capture your readers. You want them begging you to update, the more of that the longer your update time can be. Also don't switch the POV's too much, you need to keep it obvious who's POV it is.

one_messed_up_mind

@-PercyJackson  no problem, I love these stories. I would love to write one of my own. If I may suggest something, I would remove the idea of a Percy sibling. Keeping in mind that I only read the first chapter, I would like you to know that Percy siblings are a huge turn off to readers and some readers won't continue with the chapter.  Depending on how far you wrote the concept, I would try to remove it. Try not to take this comment as offensive, just constructive criticism. If you wan to keep the sibling and have great plans with them,  then wonderful!  Like I said before, I would like to write this one of these myself and I have tons of ideas for these stories. If you need help for a chapter, or some constructive criticism/support let me know, I love to help authors. I see great potential in your writing, don't give up!