one_more_dreamer

@Jozamber Thanks!

Jozamber

I think the biggest thing to remember is that past tense is easiest to use for a fluent story. Though, character thoughts are always present. To separate thoughts from narration, use italics!
          That's the most effective advice I can give you.
          Oh, and always read over your work. Everyone makes mistakes on rough drafts!

one_more_dreamer

I wonder if you guys even read this, but I just wanted to thank all of you for being so amazing. I don't have a bagillion fans, but you guys are enough. Please keep critiquing my stories, giving me suggestions, and telling me if you want me to continue! It really has helped a bunch! Thanks again :) x