Yunizo_Junizo
Holy heck, you’re story “Halo: Alien Senses” is AMAZING! I loved the sci-fi and technological speech in there. I’m actually writing a sci-fi story myself but I’m finding it hard to making anything sound futuristic without it sounding stupid, cliche, or too present-day. I was wondering if you could critique my book? Totally up to you if you don’t want to read though :D https://www.wattpad.com/1296199797-sentient-red-prologue-i-major