Holy heck, you’re story “Halo: Alien Senses” is AMAZING! I loved the sci-fi and technological speech in there. I’m actually writing a sci-fi story myself but I’m finding it hard to making anything sound futuristic without it sounding stupid, cliche, or too present-day. I was wondering if you could critique my book? Totally up to you if you don’t want to read though :D
https://www.wattpad.com/1296199797-sentient-red-prologue-i-major
To my followers,
There will be a couple new chapters to Halo: Catastrophic Fury soon. I won't specify when, because frankly I don't know when I'll get to finishing those chapters with school going on and homework getting in my way. So peace out and hang in there.
Sincerely, Jordan
To all of my dear followers. I am not dead just busy with school and I am still working and reworking some stories. So I hope that you can enjoy some of them once they get put up. When I put them up.