onionbby

Read this for my friend. She’s been struggling with writing because she feels there’s no point if no one is reading, but I think she will feel motivated if at least SOMEONE is reading. Try to comment as much as possible and please vote. 
          	https://my.w.tt/HSBQSPQmvR

onionbby

Damn bruh people actually read my stories I’ve been gone mad long and when I log in I have like 800 notifications and it’s not because of the new update LMAO

onionbby

LMFAOOOOOOOOO
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DragonMaster1416

The reader dose lose their whole clan at a young age, witnessing the deaths. She dose have relations to the two tails, but she isn't a jinchuriki, her clan just has relations to the two tails. She is special amoung her clan, making her powerful, but I'm still making her have to wait to unlock those abilities, and learn to control them. She will be strong but not like a super sayen, just strong like Sakura, for example. I just need the character to be able to stand on her own next to Sasuke. I have the two meet at a young age cause Sasuke is more open and shows more affection before the massicure. And even though he still builds bonds, and loves after it, he still chooses to avenge his old bonds instead of sticking with his new ones. So if he cares for the reader before the massicure, I'm pretty sure a normal person would hold tightly to their last strong bond they have, not wanting to lose it after losing the others. I am also going to get the reader to be able to travel down the same path as Sasuke because of this. She lost the clan to, so her and Sasuke will be on the same path, unlike the new bonds he made with team 7 who couldn't share his path for they did not go threw what he had. I'm doing this cause I've never read a fanfiction that has the reader follow him on his path, and I've read alot. Anyway I know this is long but back in point. While my opinion is good and all, it's better to have someone else's opinion, so I was wondering if you could take a look at it to see where I can make improvements so take my book doesn't go down the drain, and just let me Know what you think. Thanks for reaching this.

onionbby

I’m sorry I’m getting back to you late! I’ve been switching between this acc and a kind of shared one with my friend @strangeencounter but I’ll definitely make sure to check it out!
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DragonMaster1416

I checked out Skin and it was better than you give it credit for. I'm gonna read the revised one soon. I also read the book you published about what people do wrong when writing Naruto fanfiction, and I agree with your points. You don't know how much of a relief it was to finally read a Sasunaru/narusasu where Sakura and the other girls weren't portrayed as biches. You kept true to their characters, so thank you so much for that. While I was reading the what people do wrong when writing Naruto fanfiction, I began to worry about my Sasuke x reader called Never Alone. I have some of the stuff mentioned in the book, but I personally think that I'm portraying it correctly. 

sprinkling-stardust

should I read the original "skin" or the revised "skin"? ^^ it looks like an interesting book, but I know the revised one isn't completed.

onionbby

I made a lot of changes to better than book, and yes, I update really slow sometimes, but my original work isn't as great or detailed. 
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onionbby

Revised, please! XD
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