The reader dose lose their whole clan at a young age, witnessing the deaths. She dose have relations to the two tails, but she isn't a jinchuriki, her clan just has relations to the two tails. She is special amoung her clan, making her powerful, but I'm still making her have to wait to unlock those abilities, and learn to control them. She will be strong but not like a super sayen, just strong like Sakura, for example. I just need the character to be able to stand on her own next to Sasuke. I have the two meet at a young age cause Sasuke is more open and shows more affection before the massicure. And even though he still builds bonds, and loves after it, he still chooses to avenge his old bonds instead of sticking with his new ones. So if he cares for the reader before the massicure, I'm pretty sure a normal person would hold tightly to their last strong bond they have, not wanting to lose it after losing the others. I am also going to get the reader to be able to travel down the same path as Sasuke because of this. She lost the clan to, so her and Sasuke will be on the same path, unlike the new bonds he made with team 7 who couldn't share his path for they did not go threw what he had. I'm doing this cause I've never read a fanfiction that has the reader follow him on his path, and I've read alot. Anyway I know this is long but back in point. While my opinion is good and all, it's better to have someone else's opinion, so I was wondering if you could take a look at it to see where I can make improvements so take my book doesn't go down the drain, and just let me Know what you think. Thanks for reaching this.