@Black_Lilly no problem it was really good!(: Im gonna recommend it in my next chapter to anybody who reads mine. I don't have very many readers especially compared to other people but I have some. I hope other people will find it as helpful as I did. I had already drafted chapter 6 before I read it so I went ahead and published it but the next chapter I'm gonna recommended your guide and try and make my story better. I may not be able to right away but over time I believe my story will get better. With practice. Thank you again