onwardsouth

Hello guys, author here. 
          	
          	I want to apologize as today I mistakenly uploaded an unfinished chapter by mistake, it wasn't even started to call it unfinished just one or two lines for preview of last chapter, and I am pretty sure you all got the notifications but as I said the new chapters will not be able to come this month. 
          	
          	Hope you will forgive me for the inconvenience and will still wait for the new updates. 

thatcatmonke

hehe i did it too
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Cofifidi765

@onwardsouth story miraculous idea : № 1 
          
          A story about a Mc boy reincarnated in miraculous world 
          
          You can give mc a phone that makes him able to change and tweak the parameters of anyone he take pictures of ( even change the gander of a boy to a girl) 
          
          Note : when mc change a boy gender (Adrian) into a girl the world will remember him (Adrian) as her like she was Born girl from the start
          
          He can tweak thinks like :
          Affection - love - lust - sensitivity - libido - interest - fate (make the girl he chose his heroine ) - alter the behavior and personality of anyone to him 
          
          He can change the states / parameters of anyone by only taking a pictures of anyone using the phone for him to have access to his / her states & parameters and tweaked to his liking
          
          Mc doesn't have a limiter with this ability (basically reality manipulation)
          Only mc will be able to use the phone ability 
          
          Mc can make himself strong using this ability with no limit 
          
          Also to make himself able to handle his harem and help him make his harem 
          
          Marinette 
          
          ( mc use the phone ability to change her behavior to be a better version of herself)
          
          Chloe 
          
          (mc change her personality & behavior to the better using the phone)
          
          alya 
          
          (mc change her personality & behavior to the better using the phone)
          
          lila 
          
          ( mc change her personality & behavior to the better using the phone)
          
            female Adrian 
          
          ( change his gender using the phone) 
          
          kagamy
          
          
          Mc can give himself the luck of the main character 
          
          ♦What do you think of this idea give me you opinion about it ♦
          ♦Remember i'm doing this just for fun ♦
          ♦No hate comment ♦
          
           What do you think author @onwardsouth are you planning on making it or is it not good?

onwardsouth

@Cofifidi765 No no it's completely fine and yes I do understand you, there are really only boy×boy out there with boy mc in mlb so far so i can understand you. 
            
            Also, Harem and too op mc is not my usual cup of tea and i am currently occupied with only one story of Chloe and i am thinking of first finishing it before going and publishing any other story. 
            
            Hope you understand. 
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Cofifidi765

@onwardsouth 
            
            You can make the the story world a fusion between the mlb world and justice league unlimited animation world to balance his power
            As to how he grew strong make it like video game the more lvl he reach the more exp he will need to level up 
            
            I hope i didn't look like a boy angry for no reason 
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Cofifidi765

@onwardsouth oh don't worry you're opinion is understandable 
            
            1 i can understand that 
            
            2 you can make a fusion between mlb world and justice league unlimited the animation world 
            
            3  the back story for the smartphone make it that the one that give him a second chance in life to reincarnate in another world give him his smartphone that he had in his previous live with that power
            
            As to how he died 
            
            Either he died saving a little girl/boy/kid before he/she die from the bus crash 
            
            4 i said that because i didn't see any story about a boy reincarnated in the miraculous world and change the characters to be a better version that in the show (including Chloe and marinate & lila if possible) and no mc boy x boy romantic relationship ) the harem part is also something i didn't see in any mlb reincarnated story 
            
            Also the mc won't follow the canon world instead he will learn from that world so his world doesn't follow the same fate
            
            5 i said that as well because i was tired from not find any story that have what i said in (4) instead i find boy mc x boy romantic relationships and that only anger me 
            And what anger me more is that i can't white stories because
             1 my English is as good as giving a video game to blind guy 
            2 i have only mobile no pc
            
            And that's everything if you have any questions author ask 
            I will wait for your response 
            
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Saja2024

I hope you update

Saja2024

@onwardsouth You didn't bother me, but I thought you left work and was depressed, but now I'm waiting for your updates
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onwardsouth

@Saja2024 I will try to get back to the pacing soon but this year is an important academic year so updates have been very slow, I will not drop it for sure so if you wait you will get the update soon enough. Apologies for the inconvenience >.<
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2rumgone

I am also arthur ,I love writing ,can you read my book please and express your views and comments ,it is in profile the tales of thugs and if you like it then please announce it to your followers so I can get some votes which can motivate to write

Florencewife

Hi writer love your story but are you going to update or what? I am tired of waiting. 

onwardsouth

@Florencewife I apologize for the wait but well, things are quite hectic these days so the update is delayed. I don't know if the update will be this week or not but I will try to as soon as possible. 
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Voiletlilly12

Hello!
          
              I have just completed reading your book. It's very nice and give out a new thriller of whats coming next.  
               Can you please upload the next chapter my curioty is getting best of me.
          
          
          From your fan 
          @Voiletlilly12 

onwardsouth

@Voiletlilly12 Aww~ thank you very much for such nice words! And don't worry, the next chapter will come soon! 
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