Chian4china
Heyyyy.. it's October... Heh.. just checking if you're still gonna upd the mlb..
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Hi guy, so my wattpad has suddenly crashed and now the stories I wrote is not even showen.... I don't know if it's the same for all my viewers but I can't access my stories now, neither write nor read it.
This issue has been going on since months now in India. Somehow it was working manageable till yesterday and then this happened.
So, we can just wait now.... Hope you understand.
@onwardsouth it seems I forgot to mention but the notifications are also useless rn. I can't read even a single comment. So if you've posted some questions before and I haven't replied then sincerely apologies but it hasn't reached me yet.
Heyyyy.. it's October... Heh.. just checking if you're still gonna upd the mlb..
Just wondering since your fanfic is meant to be an au to the original tv show then what timeline does your fanfic take place in Miraculous ladybug.
Like is the first three seasons cannon but your fanfic is alternate season 4 ect
Hey so i am writing a fanfic abt miraculous ladybug, like a self insert situation, and i want to inspire the .world building from your fanfic Like the whole less population, creativity and common sense, the plot will be completely deferent and again, it's a self insert but i wanted to tell you abt that .
@madara_fangirl Also, back then I forgot to mention because of my hectic schedule but you did not forget to give me the required credits, right? If not, please do so.
Ok just letting you know, it's called:
I see it, i like it, i want it, i got it.
ace_girl6969
Hey man, good evening!
Since you're back on Wattpad, I wanted to gift you a new sitcom I’ve been working on.
It’s called "A Trap for Paris", inspired by Who Framed Roger Rabbit, Chip 'n Dale: Rescue Rangers, Space Jam, and a joke from Looney Tunes: Back in Action.
I’m planning to post it tomorrow, maybe, and I’d love for you to check it out — share your thoughts, enjoy it, laugh, and of course, give some feedback and criticism if you can.
That’s it. Hope you like it!
@compartimentali2005 Also I am thinking some here and there things from the prolong of the fourth medium to match it more to my og conceo. It's kinda hard when you have many fan fictions of your own fan fiction in your own head and write only one of them on paper. . . I need to choose what will be the end result and the prolong is missing and misinterpreted some of it.
@compartimentali2005 Of course! Although my days are very busy now but when I have time I will read and review it. Be my guest and I also appreciate some comedy in days when holidays too don't feel like one (◍•ᴗ•◍).
Hi guy, so my wattpad has suddenly crashed and now the stories I wrote is not even showen.... I don't know if it's the same for all my viewers but I can't access my stories now, neither write nor read it.
This issue has been going on since months now in India. Somehow it was working manageable till yesterday and then this happened.
So, we can just wait now.... Hope you understand.
@onwardsouth it seems I forgot to mention but the notifications are also useless rn. I can't read even a single comment. So if you've posted some questions before and I haven't replied then sincerely apologies but it hasn't reached me yet.
Well, to answer your question: no, I’m not an old man (laughs). I’m 20 years old — although, sometimes, I feel much older… and honestly, it’s a horrible feeling. While the rest of the group is 19, 18 years old, I’m not the oldest, but still...
We met the guy (who we’re no longer in touch with) when we were about 12, still in middle school. Since I live in a somewhat rural town in Bahia, and the schools and high schools are all pretty close together, it was easy to make friends, keep them, and grow alongside everyone.
Unfortunately, out of everyone in the group, I was the one who stuck the most with a simplified drawing style. My real skill always came out when I had a rough outline of a story and started writing tense, emotional, light-hearted — and even kind of parody-style — dialogues, like you saw in the comments. That really helped me a lot, to the point where I was invited to join a select group of young writers to create a short story for a book. And, according to my former teacher, mine was her favorite. (I don’t know… looking back, I think that was an exaggeration, because I was pretty repetitive.)
As for the Miraculous story we rewrote and lost due to pure stupidity… well, I’ll tell it bit by bit as I remember the important details. I think it’s best to start from the beginning: the creation of the universe and the Miraculous themselves — since, in the show, that’s very poorly explained.
Dn this is a really great concept. And the idea of isi Natalie is just a chef's kiss for a true villain. That makes him really unlikable and smart at the same point and we as watchers would have rooted for the main team even more.
@onwardsouth Part 2 We keep the central idea of the Kwami of Creation and the Kwami of Destruction. But if the two ever merge, what awakens is not the goddess Gimmi — it is the original and rejected version of the Miraculous universe: Null, the Kwami of the Void. That’s why, when I read about the “Void” in your story, something felt familiar. In this alternate Miraculous universe, resurrecting someone is, by definition, impossible. With one single exception: Null, the only being capable of granting any wish — reshaping reality according to the will of the Creator. However, if the wish is shallow or goes against universal principles, an equivalent exchange will be demanded — a concept inspired by Fullmetal Alchemist (yes, that’s a light spoiler). Gabriel has always known this. And what was his true intention from the beginning? To use Nathalie as the equivalent exchange to bring Emilie back to life. Without her consent. Without her knowing. That’s why he kept her so close all these years: to use her as a bargaining chip. Even if someone tries to resort to a Miraculous with similar powers, like the Peacock, to create a sentimonster capable of resurrection, Null intervenes, preventing it from working. After all, through his eyes as the Kwami of the Void, life is divine, central, and untouchable. > You may create life... But to destroy it, and then wish to bring it back? That is not part of his plan.
@onwardsouth In this alternate story we created years ago, Wang Fu's path is also different: the fall of the Temple of the Guardians happened for other reasons — I’ll explain that later. Yes, there are other Miraculous boxes scattered across the world, both conceptual Miraculouses and primitive ones, hidden in completely secret locations or used by an order based in a tropical continent (spoiler). The reason why, throughout millennia, humanity has never suspected the existence of the Miraculouses is simple: it’s easy to mistake a bearer for a metahuman with superpowers. And in a way, that interpretation isn’t entirely wrong. Although they are magical artifacts, Miraculouses have been perceived differently over the ages. In the Middle Ages and during the Crusades, for example, the Kwamis were seen as divine gifts. In Ancient Greece, Egypt, Sparta, and various Asian cultures, they were considered manifestations of gods or mystical entities that could manipulate the very essence of magic. However, humans capable of truly understanding or controlling that magic were always extremely rare — and have almost completely vanished over the centuries. In this universe, Kwamis do not die — not even if their sealing objects are destroyed. That’s because, essentially, concepts do not die. Kwamis are guardians, almost like guardian angels: eternal manifestations of fundamental ideas in the universe.
Well, like I said yesterday, I was going to tell you about the story we made — so here it is. But before we get there, I have to pull up another awesome flashback — so get ready for the flashback.
Part 1
Six years ago, Brazil, state of Bahia. The year was 2019 — a wonderful year, by the way. I saw my favorite soccer team, Flamengo, win the state championship, the Brazilian Championship, and the Libertadores (which is the South American version of the Champions League). I also passed the school year alongside my friends — friends I’m still in touch with today and who are part of that group I mentioned in the Interstellar Chloé story: Kauê, Ruben, Breno, Leonardo, Gustavo, Isac, Alisson, and others I haven’t mentioned yet, like Vinícius, Etevaldo, Felipe Smith, Gabriel, Deyverson, etc.
Back then, most of us were 14 going on 15, and almost everyone could draw or had a talent for writing, creating stories, and even composing music. We even made an amateur Naruto manga — a “What If” involving Sakura and the Haruno clan. But anyway...
Not to mention the movies that came out that year — my God, what a great year 2019 was for cinema: The Irishman, Once Upon a Time in Hollywood, Joker, 1917, Parasite, Ford v Ferrari, Avengers: Endgame, Marriage Story, The Two Popes... I remember we drew like crazy for the whole school just to earn enough money for movie tickets.
But then the happiness ended when the infamous year 2020 arrived.
@onwardsouth Well, from what I’ve heard from some Indians here on YouTube, many habits in Brazil aren’t very different from those in India. And movies like Life of Pi, Slumdog Millionaire, and Vanaja are well known here and really appreciated. About me and my friends, I wouldn’t say people envied us; it was more like, “Hey, those kids who draw charge like 4 reais, and this guy draws Naruto in Kurama mode, you know?” There was always a guy who drew in class. It was hard work, but as the old saying goes, “If you’re good at something, don’t do it for free.” In our case, we became friends with that guy and learned to draw from him. Some improved their lines, others, like me, stayed simple. And, before anything else, I finished the chapter “Meeting,” commented, and did some things, so please don’t take offense. https://www.wattpad.com/1403614514-night-watcher-i-am-chloe-bourgeois-miraculous
@compartimentali2005 Sir??? (You'r a boy right) That was an awesome backstory! The kind of friendship you have is the kind that people usually envy over. Not to mention, I got to know a thing or two about Brazil (although it was the somewhat same here in India). The school I studied from is a strict school that never allowed internal business and stuff, so I don't have this kind of story. Your friends' names are really interesting too (I'm not really familiar with names like Gustavo, Kauê, Deyverson, Etevaldo etc). I totally agree that Marinette is in fact the worst kind of protagonist. We are suppose to see ourselves in her, suppose to root for her, be happy in our achievements. And yet, if she acts like this then it's kinda hard to do even one of them. Also, I would LOVE to hear about the story.
Part 3
Even with the pandemic, we watched the episodes from home, on the now-defunct Gloob channel, and we commented on everything via WhatsApp. When the season ended, the feelings were mixed: some were angry, others were relieved that it was finally over. But one thing was unanimous: the disappointment with the ending — and the conclusion that Marinette was, to us, the worst animated series protagonist we had ever seen.
A few days later (I don’t remember exactly when), we were talking about how the show had turned into garbage — like The Flash, only way worse. That’s when Ruben Ridan, the Irish guy, showed us some ideas he had been writing about Miraculous. We looked at it with that face like, “damn, this is awesome!”
A few days went by, and we started discussing the possibility of rewriting the Miraculous story our way — with a more mature, more serious vibe and, as the story progressed, even more violent.
I’ll discuss the synopsis and some parts of the story we lost that I remember, as soon as I have time.
Part 1
Hi! I'd like to share an idea for a fanfic I'm planning to write, and I'd love to hear your opinion.
The story would be a fusion between the Miraculous Ladybug and Naruto universes. It would take place in Kisekigakure, a hidden village inspired by Paris, located where Yumegakure (the village that appears in one of the Naruto games, near Konoha) originally existed.
The tradition of Kisekigakure is based on the Miraculous, mystical artifacts created by the Sage of the Six Paths himself. The village's clans are organized around the concepts of the Kwamis from the Miraculous series. Each clan possesses unique traits and abilities derived from the Miraculous they represent:
Tikki Clan – Includes Marinette and Sabine as members. Their jutsus are based on luck and destiny manipulation, allowing users to escape fatal situations or alter the course of events in their favor.
Plagg Clan – With Adrien and Gabriel among its members, their jutsus involve destruction and decay, similar to explosive or corrosive release techniques, capable of disintegrating matter with a single touch of chakra.
Pollen Clan – Composed of Chloé, Zoé, and Nathanaël, this clan is similar to the Aburame clan, but uses special bees for combat, tracking, and information gathering. They also possess the Hōganshi, a dōjutsu that grants 360-degree vision, inspired by a real bee’s sight, capable of detecting subtle movements and air vibrations — making them excellent sentinels and trackers.
@ onwardsouth In response to your question: yes, Team 7 will meet the Miraculous Team. The story takes place between the "Squip" Team arc and the beginning of Naruto Shippuden, and I plan to give more prominence to this version of Team 7 with Yamato, Sai,Sakura, and Naruto. That’s because, to me, Yamato is one of the most interesting characters in the series. He has an excellent design, rare jutsus, and there weren’t enough moments in the story to properly explore his role as both a sensei and an elite ninja.
Sai isn’t my favorite character, but I don’t think he’s bad either. His jutsus are cool and creative — they actually remind me of Nathanaël when he was akumatized (Evillustrator). His interactions with Naruto and Sakura are sometimes really funny. That scene where he comments on the "size of Naruto’s package" and calls Sakura "ugly" is priceless. His relationship with Ino is also nice, even if it only had one or two scenes of development. In Boruto, along with couples like Shikamaru and Temari, and Sakura and Sasuke, they’re one of the pairings that most look like a real couple.
Sakura is the kind of character who had insane potential, but ended up falling short. The idea that she would specialize in genjutsu, as Kakashi once suggested, was completely dropped. Her relationship with Sasuke, although persistent, is poorly developed — which is a shame, because visually, like Marinette and Adrien, they make a great-looking couple. But unfortunately, the execution was a mess.
The beginning of the story will take place during the Chunin Exams, which will be held in the Village of Grass. There, Kagami,Lila, Chloé, Ivan, Nathanaël, Félix, and Luka will meet Asuma’s team (without Shikamaru), Kurenai, and Guy. So prepare for some epic clashes and even better elimination rounds. Spoiler: there will be a showdown between Chloé using hive-style jutsu and Shino with his insect jutsu — so expect a very evenly matched battle.
Good luck with your new Naruto-based story!
Marc – Clan Orikko
Similar to the Lee Clan
Specialists in taijutsu (hand-to-hand combat)
Luka – Clan Sass
Secret Jutsu – Coiled Gaze: A visual genjutsu that traps the target in a repetitive mental loop, locking them in hypnotic illusions.
Kim – Clan Tuppu
Mirrored Monkey Technique: The user mimics the opponent's movements like a reflection, creating confusion and psychological imbalance.
Jean, Aurore, Mireille – Clan Ziggy
Jutsu of Inspired Domain: Allows the user to modify terrain or objects around them by infusing chakra, crafting useful shapes or traps.
Hello! Something interesting happened to me recently, and I'd like to share a quick flashback — so get ready:
Two days ago, I was watching a rerun of Over the Garden Wall with my younger brother. When the character known as "The Beast" appeared, I became intrigued, and after the episode ended, I decided to look up some fan theories about the show. That’s when I noticed something curious: visually, the Beast bears a strong resemblance to your description of Grace — the original Akuma from your story — with a dark touch reminiscent of Samara from the movie The Ring.
Inspired by this similarity, I decided to try illustrating Grace. I invited my friend Alisson (whom I affectionately nicknamed “Neil Armstrong”) to help me with the drawing. This time, the artwork will be simpler than the one we did for Interstellar Chloe, since Grace’s description is more straightforward: a woman in a black dress, with Herobrine-like eyes and a hairstyle resembling flower petals.
Once we finish, I’ll get in touch to share the final result.
@compartimentali2005 that's a whole character's background arc [from an author's perspective :) ]. I can't wait to see the results! Also say hello to Neil Armstrong! (My previous comment by mistake got deleted (•‿•), so if you got the notification, then just know they too are my own words that I wanted to convey.)
If you want to improve the drawing in any way—whether by adding textures, straightening the lines because they're too crooked, or even adding an image—you’re welcome to do so. I give you permission to do that.
Honestly, it was a headache to make this drawing, so I probably won’t make another one.
@compartimentali2005 oh it's all fine and all. Take your all time, the stories are but to enjoy. Mine is no different. It is of no difference than them. Have fun in your free time and enjoy to your liking! :)
@onwardsouth I’ll continue commenting on the chapters of your story with ironic and critical remarks about Miraculous. At the moment, I’ve stopped at the chapter titled “Reunion” because I haven’t had time to read further due to household chores and taking care of my younger siblings. I might work on another drawing with the help of my friends, but for now, I’ll stay quiet to avoid another headache.
@onwardsouth I thank you from the bottom of my heart. It would be hypocritical of me to say that I did everything by myself. I had the help of friends who have a more refined style, including one named Alix, and as you know, teasing is common when you are a Miraculous fan; they made the sketches on paper and, from there, I finished some parts and recreated the sketches in Infinite Painter with the final lines. As for the colors and images, I used materials available on the internet, and the cutting and editing process was quite laborious but worth it.
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