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I'm going through my chapters to fix the dialogue grammar man this is gonna take forever and I've barely started on just the short ones at the start
why couldn't old me just have googled how to use speech correctly </3
also what the fuck is my punctuation like why was there a comma and no "he said" or some shit after, and why was there no closing " and just a question mark for one of them </3
STOPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPP