orangewolf

Thanks I try to put as much beef into the story as I can but I will try harder thanks let me know if you need help at all I can edit pretty good oh and my friend is writing "time will tell" kehovanetz  please read

Tasting_Rainbows

I will. And honestly, I'm in desperate need of an editor! hehe
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Tasting_Rainbows

I'll try- um- make sure to add just enough detail- as in don't go over board with it telling the viewers every single last aspect if what something looks like but just enough to visualize it  in your head, don't make short chapter make chapters with at least 4 or more pages if you can. Make sure to detail out the characters like hair color eye color body image and so on... That about all I can give right now.... I hope this helped somewhat... 
          And good luck on your story! I read what was there and so far  it's good, just add some more detail.... ;) ( more detail= longer chapters)