@_crimson_venom_ heyyyy
i love ur book, it’s amongst the best ones i’ve read on here!! In terms of feedback, i think it would be nice to have some non-leading characters pov (like sophiya) to give more perspectives on the situation. I also think that, for the plot, if eva tells someone but then leonid finds out and does something (idk what) to scare her. Also, I just want to say that some of Ivan’s lines are actually leaving me speechless, they are beyond amazing! I’m really enjoying the book, pls keep writing and if u need anything, pls come to me anytime
