Shakattack13

Hi, I am starting to write my own omegaverse Stray Kids fanfic but I don't seem to be getting any traction, I really love all of your stories and I was wondering if you had any tips? No pressure, I'm happy to just keep enjoying your stories regardless, thank you for sharing them with us

Shakattack13

@Shakattack13 thank you so much for taking the time to read it, I have slowly been going through and fixing the tenses, I appreciate your advice and will be keeping in my mind for the future
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ot82016

@Shakattack13 It's really good!! I would say to just make the sentences shorter, (as in just go through and put in some full stops, basically wherever you need to take a breath!)
            And if you section up the writing a bit more it would make it easier to read. So just add in some paragraphs. I tend to do new ones for all speech. 
            Last thing is it changes a couple of times from present to past tense. 
            But the language is really good, really interesting vocab and well written! Really like the premise. 
            
            When I wrote my first one I was really just doing it for me, so didn't tend to look at how many people were reading it. But as I added stories they really picked up. So my suggestion is, keep writing for you, and if another story comes to you, write it alongside (though I find this is a necessity for my ADHD, don't do it if it's a struggle!) And see where things go! ♥️♥️♥️♥️
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Shakattack13

Thank you, I'm reorganising it a bit at the moment so it may be a little choppy I apologise
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skysinterlude03

My dearest and loveliest author, I recently discovered your work and I'm hungry for more. I started out with the other mate then stumbled upon your other books destined is one of my favourites and I just got finished with chapter 38 and I'm heading over to bonded then dystopia and blind to them. You are a lovely author with unique ideas and I can't wait to read more updates from you  no pressure but(destined is REALLY good I'm shaking for my next fix like a cocaine addict) anyway byyeeee

ot82016

@skyslinterlude03  Ah thank you so much!!! I'm so glad you enjoy the stories, I'm loving writing them! Haha I'll try and write more of it soon! ♥️♥️♥️
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stargirl_251124

Hiiiii i just wanted to ask when you'll be updating on bonded because I love that story and its been 12 days already no pressure tho u can post whenever you like its just that I love you're stories and i always look forward to your updates

ot82016

@stargirl_251124  thank you! ♥️♥️♥️
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stargirl_251124

@stargirl_251124 your welcome but how can I not enjoy your stories your writing slays
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ot82016

@stargirl_251124 ♥️♥️♥️♥️ thank you so much!! More updates will be coming next week!! Thank you so much for enjoying my stories  ❤️❤️❤️
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