abiiiliah

Hi, po! Can i ask for a favor? Please do visit my timeline and read my works. It will help me a lot. I need comments about how i write, so that i can improve it. I will accept any comments about my works. Please do not expect too much, thank you. Also, i published two one-shot stories and i wrote them when i was still young. Hope to earn advice, thanks!   
          
          Here are the links:
          https://my.w.tt/X0hdu9asScb
          https://my.w.tt/P8cuOKbsScb
          
          Thank you so much!