BadEnemy2u

Hi, I just read your book, and I wanted to point something out if you don't mind 
          
          Idk if you noticed it or not, but sometimes two or three people would be speaking in the same paragraph, idk if it's intentional or not.
          
          There are some other punctuation issues and some minor mistakes.

BadEnemy2u

@otterfey you won't mind me filling your comment section with things you need to fix? 😅🙈
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otterfey

@BadEnemy2u nvm it’s fixed! check if u want lol,
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otterfey

@BadEnemy2u OMG THANK U SM I WILL FIX IT WHEN I CAN!! Can u tell me which one tho?
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